Saturday, March 27

CHALLENGE 4: Something you wish you said when you had the chance

give it a shot in 17 syllables
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17 comments:

  1. you cannot have me
    my family is waiting
    i'm going home now

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  2. she looked great that day
    bright pretty dress and nice shoes
    she always smells good

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  3. It's been a long time
    Sorry I'm a lousy friend
    How are you doing?

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  4. sure, i'll come over
    lets watch rocky IV again
    i'll bring the popcorn

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  5. have i ever said
    i will love you forever
    please don't ever leave

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  6. I make an effort
    To show you everyday that
    I'm in love with you.

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  7. wish i were allowed
    to fall in love with you too.
    jealousy prevails.

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  8. hey, new york city.
    can i please have my watch back?
    you keep stealing time.

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  9. i think you're too smart
    to waste your time with that guy
    i really know you

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  10. i really don't think
    i am capable of love
    if it's not with you

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  11. i will do anything
    to wrap my arms around you
    and keep them from you

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  12. I don't believe you.
    Your loyalties are such that
    You would protect him.

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  13. I really know you
    are the one wasting your time.
    I betcha that smarts.

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  14. don't get in that cab
    let the dawn be our blanket
    stay with me tonight

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  15. What is vivid now
    Time will muddy, obscure, blur
    please let's not let it

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  16. God, I am sorry
    For my sins, though it is not
    My fault you are not.

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  17. i wish you had said
    that you loved me forever
    before you were gone

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